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Thursday, September 10, 2020

Jayden the giraffe

today I am going to write a story about this picture

Jayden the Giraffe

On an extremely hot day Jaden the giraffe was walking through the forest There were trees everywhere Jaden was walking through mud. There were beautiful flowers everywhere as he was looking at the flowers he could smell fresh air, wet dirt and a lot of rotting bark.


He heard the scariest sound it was a… Bee! he was running for his life. He ran up a tree and the bee flew away. Jaden looked down and he realised he was up a tree.


Jayden got very afraid and he was screaming for help. He got tired of screaming. Jayden could see everything Jayden could see heaps of trees and heaps of clouds like cotton candy above him. He could still see the flowers below. He loved the flowers so much he was looking at them for about 2 minutes.


 All of the sudden He started to slip all the way down the tree when he got to the bottom he was so extremely happy.


I am a green level writer because my narrative has an introduction,problem and solution in paragraphs with some editing including great word choices.



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